diumenge, 11 de juny de 2017

Xavi and Pep: Photo essay

7 comentaris:

  1. Marc Vilalta: In my opinion this photo essay is very well written, but what is not good at all is that they didn't take any photo they uploaded all of them and is not really a good photo essay.

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  2. Clàudia Navas
    In my opinion this photo-essay is very well presented and it's atractive, it incitates you to read it. But the information is not very clear and it's true that some photos had been uploaded from the internet.

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  3. In my opinion this photo essay is very interesting because this man comes to the school and i liked a lot what he said. The photos are with good quality and the text is elaborated.

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  4. Marc Millan Tiana
    I agree with Marc because this photo essay is well written and it's well presented. But the photos are uploaded from internet.

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  5. Marc Millan Tiana
    I agree with Marc because this photo essay is well written and it's well presented. But the photos are uploaded from internet.

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  6. This photo essay is great. The text is good written and the photos are with quality. The topic is very fascinating because it is good to know that they are persons, like Javi, that love to help peolpe that need it. The only problema is that the text isn't as clear as it should be. A part from that is a good photo essay.

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  7. It's not very clear what this person does as a voluntary helper. You talk a lot more about his job. You start with a photo of the place. I think you should start with the person.
    The photos are not yours and I don't think you need 2 of the place where he works. You didn't mention the connection with Montcau.
    Is this English yours? It's very inconsistent!
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